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(@ruepickle)
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The carpet is screaming
as elephants dance
the ants are swarming
the television is warming

The carpet is yelping
don't step on me
you feline blues
take off your shoes

The carpet the carpet
it's so entirely square
the carpet the carpet
no the rooms not bare

The carpet is dancing
to a lively tune
as artichokes fall
can you hear their call?

The carpet is sleeping
be quiet so yo udon't wake
the squid sleeping soundly
on the carpet so roundly

The carpet the carpet
it's so entirely square
the carpet the carpet
no the rooms not bare

The carpet is waltzing
to a foreign tune
and i am warm, asleep
and i couldn't hear a peep


   
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(@straycat)
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Joined: 20 years ago
Posts: 1282
 

rue, you genius:)

that's again wonderful *smile*
nothing to improve. nothing left to say for me.

go on like this and you'll make me cry :wink:
see you
bluenightangel

"oh, eventually it will break your heart" - anders wendin


   
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(@alangreen)
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Joined: 22 years ago
Posts: 5342
 

Bizarre. Nothing wrong with that.

Would be nice to hear it played.

Best,

A :-)

"Be good at what you can do" - Fingerbanger"
I have always felt that it is better to do what is beautiful than what is 'right'" - Eliot Fisk
Wedding music and guitar lessons in Essex. Listen at: http://www.rollmopmusic.co.uk


   
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(@scratchmonkey)
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Posts: 603
 

Well Rue,

You certainly hit the "through the looking glass" angle on this one. 8) I like it. It seems to be a bit of a hodge-podge of random thoughts. Is that what you were going for?

-- Scratch

-- Scratch 8)


"...if heartaches were commercials, we'd all be on TV" -- John Prine
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(@arden)
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Posts: 12
 

Like the line about the squid
Cephalopods are an underrepresented minority in today's popular music. :wink:


   
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