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(@katreich)
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Take a walk down to the ocean
Take in natures ebb and flow
Think of all God's imperfections
Every puzzlement you know
Lose yourself among the beauty
And the quiet of the place
Feel the breeze against your features
Fell my hand caress your face
Like a breeze

I see you standing in the shadows
Watching twilight fall
Wrapped up inside your worry
Trapped inside the same four walls
Throw open wide the windows
Let the night air come inside
Fell the breeze caress your body
Fell me standing by your side
I'm like a breeze

And when you waken in the morning
Amidst the tangles sheets and spread
Will you hum a little melody
That's been rolling around your head
It's a love song that I wrote
And that I whispered in your ear
Last night as you lay sleeping
And that only you can hear

It's a love song that I wrote
and that I whispered in your ear
Last night as you lay sleeping
And I wasn't even there
I'm like a breeze
Blowin on through
A breeze
Brings my love to you.

Falling in love is like learning to play the guitar; first you learn to follow the rules, then you learn to play with your heart.

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(@jadiny)
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i get a country feel to it. Its really good. What ideas do you have for this song as in style it's sung and played, it would be interesting to hear what it sounds like.

good work katreich :D

Keep away from people who try to belittle your ambitions small people always do that, but the really great ones make you feel that you too, can become great.

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 Celt
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Katreich,

Very Nice,

I too would interested in hearing your mucical take on this one. I get a feel of it being done very softly With parts almost whispered.
And when you waken in the morning
Amidst the tangles sheets and spread

I like this part it seems to ground the song in reality for me.

Just one small question and it may just be a typo.

Should it be "Amidst the Tangles OF sheets and spread"?

Good Job

Celt

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(@katreich)
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Good eye Celt, It's a typo. It shoud be "amidst the tangled sheets and spread" . You are also right on the money as far as the music for this one. It is kind of soft and slow.

Falling in love is like learning to play the guitar; first you learn to follow the rules, then you learn to play with your heart.

www.soundclick.com/kathyreichert


   
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