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SSG wk 31 ~ My Catherine

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ruepickle
(@ruepickle)
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when i think of summer, i think of my childhood, and also my neice's current childhood. just the innocence and grandeur of being a 2 year old during the summer time. i don't know. just coolness you know?

so yeah, tell me if this sucks ;)

oh, i'll try and get a rough mp3 of me singing it onto soundclick sometime. . . might be monday before i do though.

Catherine
(c) 2006

She smiles as she holds
Her daisy watering can
Demanding water
and smiling with glee
as cold water runs through her hands

my Catherine
two year old smiles abound
my Catherine
you make my world go around

the grays and blacks
of the corporate world
fade to greens and blues
as I come back to see you
in a place with much gentler hue's

my Catherine
two year old smiles abound
my Catherine
you make my world go around


   
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lotto king
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Hi ruepickle ( nice name I'm thinking your real name might be Rue ?)

I found this a tad bit short ( I will be looking for your MP3 if you get the time to record it )

so yeah, tell me if this sucks

mmm the song does not suck , that statement comes pretty close though , what I believe you meant to ask was , what do you think of my song ?

Children suck candy ( lollies ) a leech sucks blood , song writters write songs , noone loves every song ever written , it's all about finding the creativeness inside to write that one terrific song or just a fantastic lyric .

I am in my 60's aand I have not managed to this yet , I thought I did once but then found out it was used by about 10 different artists about 20 years before I thought of it .

Enough of the old fool ...your song

She smiles as she holds
Her daisy watering can
Demanding water
and smiling with glee
as cold water runs through her hands

mmm seems a little eratic to me
First 2 lines I like they work well
Demanding water
and smiling with glee

You are mentioing 2 different subjects here
1 SHE < smiling with glee
2 demanding water < she isn't is she ?

I might wait till I hear this before continueing I might be way off here

L.K

Aghhhh

Not only am I a senior citizen

I'm now a bloody senior member

Are you people trying to tell me I'm old or what ?

over 700 posts ( I really do need to get out more )


   
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