At long last I have managed to put this to music. Thanks to all who inspired me and helped along the way especially John, Scratch and Marv. Still not happy with the melody, I think the lyrics deserve so much more. So comments will be very much appreciated
You can hear it at
http://www.mp3.com.au/artist.asp?id=21709
Here are ther lyrics if you have forgotten it
Midnight Blue Satin
him
Midnight, blue satin, shimmers, in the night
Silhouettes born of the soft candle light
I wait,I watch, your breath, rise and fall
Mirrored in the shadows on the wall
Midnight, blue satin, molded, to your thighs
Rippling, waves, ebb and flow to your cries
A fluid, moving river, no turning the tide
Your mystery's the deeper part you hide
Midnight, blue satin, etched in my brain
Physical ecstasy, emotional pain
her
Midnight blue satin, hides my love for you
Shadowed, eyes closed, emotions shut from view
Feelings float, above these rushing waves
Not wanting you to see the love I crave
Midnight blue satin, tears burn in my eyes
Would you turn on the tide, knowing what I hide
My hands explore your body, I feel the rising heat,
Wrapped around you, lost in lust, we meet
Midnight, blue satin, etched in my brain
Physical ecstasy, emotional pain
him
Midnight, blue satin, tossed, on the floor
Bodies, entwined, waves caressing the shore
I, hear your cry, I come to your call
Mirrored in the shadow on the wall
Midnight, blue satin, etched in my brain
Physical ecstasy, emotional pain
Mirrored in the shadow on the wall
Mirrored in the shadow on the wall
Go well
Ja'mir
I am a cloud within a cloud http://www.justjamir.com
you can hear my songs at :
Jamir
I remember this one. I love what you have done with it.
I think the lyrics evoke a darker musically style but enjoy
the juxtaposition of the words against the sweeter sounding
music.
Does that make sense?
Just a thought...I'm hearing Flute or Penny Whistle as accompaniment.
John
I liked this when I just read the lyrics. I really like the music. And I love your voice. Very nice.
Joe
Thank you both for the comments, appreciate your imput. :)
Go well
Ja'mir
I am a cloud within a cloud http://www.justjamir.com
you can hear my songs at :