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Shift
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I wrote a short piece for this week. Still need to write a bit more for it.
I did a quick recording to give you all an idea of how it sounds so far.

I called it Change

Verse

The old man Broken and withered
Looks for a reason to carry on

The dim lights Lost in the shadows
Hiding the clutter of a life passed by

The old life Busted and shattered
Drowns his feelings til they are gone

Chorus

Times passes by, Changing your life
You don't understand, you are blind

Open your eyes, Change with the times
You don't have to be left behind

http://shift53.dmusic.com/

Let me know you think


   
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Anonymous
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You have a cool idea about people set in their ways and won't change. In your recording, the vocals were kind of hard to hear but the guitar playing didn't seem to fit the emotion of the vocals. At least in my opinion anyway. Great lyrics though.


   
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