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(@gjbrake)
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I think it's fair to say that this is not that complicated!
Some might even call it shallow, but here goes!
Slow blues style - I only have a bass line so far.

Credit where it's due:
Title: nroberts
Chorus: redrider

HAD MY FILL

One too many 'does my bum look big in this'?
One too many 'just gimme one more kiss'.
One too many 'we never talk anymore'.
One too many 'well, they've got one next door'.
One too many times, babe,
This is it.

Had my fill want you to know,
Had my fill I gotta go,
Had my fill just need to say,
Had my fill of you baby I'm on my way.

One too many 'these girls nights out are rare'.
One too many 'but I've got nothing to wear'.
One too many 'you know it's only a game'.
One too many 'you were down the pub again'.
One too many times, babe,
This is it.

Had my fill want you to know,
Had my fill I gotta go,
Had my fill just need to say,
Had my fill of you baby I'm on my way.

Had my fill of you baby I'm on my way.
Had my fill of you baby I'm on my way.

Listen Louder Than You Play


   
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(@rocketgirl)
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Gjbrake,

I like the your idea. The only thing I might say is that I"m not sure of this lineOne too many 'does my bum look big in this'?
Is that how you wrote it or has it been edited for this site? Do we really sound like this? :wink: G.


   
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 pbee
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Hey gjbrake,

Im a sucker for blues, I like like it.
Some might even call it shallow, but here goes!

Blue is more about emotion than philosophy anyway, good work :D .

pbee


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(@nroberts)
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Very cool. Now it needs music.


   
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