Hey all,
Here are some more candidates:
1) Floating above this bed I can see
2) Now where were We?
3) Opening lines are always hard
4) I've got all the natural rhythm of a traffic accident (a recent quote from Vic)
5) If you want to know a secret (this is the first line to a song I've help unfinished for a few years now)
Ice cream is a dish best served cold.
Hi,
I like how the first line could take on 2 meanings (if you'd put a comma after bed).
3. sounds like a letter and 4. sounds like it's gonna make a great song.
5. needs a secret, oh boy, where do we get that from :D
Good start(s) :wink:
straycat.
"oh, eventually it will break your heart" - anders wendin
Ah, you don't have to disclose the secret; certainly not if you want people to buy the next album.
1 and 2 are good, and 5 is a natural. I like 4 but you'd be hard pushed to make it scan.
A :-)
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I like #2 also.
Could be about all of lifes little interruptions.
(Think Cialis commercial :roll: )
