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mysticmoonangel
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well i had a day off and came up with the rest of my verses :?
my apologies to spage and +lostbegginings+ for messing with their choruses but some how they fit so well togother.

this letter to you(aeryn.mcavan)
chorus by (spadge & +lostbegginings+)

these words that i have written never meaning to be read
words all jumbled up stuck within my head
i sit alone in a solemn daze pencil in my hand
the words they escape me
as a thousand tear drops shed
theres no one here to hear me
just the shadows on the walls
i read the words I've written
and again the tear drops fall

(chorus)
this letter to you
will never make it
these words i write
will never be read
and all i have to say to you
will stay inside my head
eating away at my heart
pulling at the threads of yesterday
to pull my world apart

how do i find my way
threw these feelings left inside
my soul is bare i can not hide
I'm all alone an it's an it's a little to dark here for me
oh baby

jumbled words on paper read
how does love just slip away
how is it there then just goes away
i wonder were it went
i wonder were it is
i wonder was it really even there
jumbled words on paper never meaning to be read
jumbled words stuck within my head

(chorus)
this letter to you
will never make it
these words i write
will never be read
and all i have to say to you
will stay inside my head
eating away at my heart
pulling at the threads of yesterday
to pull my world apart


   
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rocketgirl
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Hi mystic,

Kinda going on what pbee said to me, I want to hear more. Want the particulars. The chorus tells me that you'll never be heard the verses tell me how you feel about it and now I want to know why. You've done a good job on getting the emotion out. Keep it up. G. :)


   
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mysticmoonangel
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thanks rocketgirl

thought about what u said and wanted to know if this sounds better or makes it more clear

I wounder why you left
with out a word to anyone
how do i find my way
threw these feelings left undone
my soul is bare i can not hide
I'm all alone an it's an it's a little to dark here for me
oh baby


   
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+LostBeggining+
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no apology needed. I really like what you've done with the song.

Keep it up!!

Rain Shadow


   
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