hmmm.... here's what I have. I'm defining lines by thoughts.. so even if they're more than two lines.. its still two thoughts... or.. something.
"The view is... so beautiful.
From the bottom of this puddle
I'd never even noticed I'd been crying"
"It's been two days
But I can still smell your perfume"
-Marv
I like both sets I would love to see how this one turns out.
"The view is... so beautiful.
From the bottom of this puddle
I'd never even noticed I'd been crying"
Frank
Life is not what you did. It's what you are doing.
"The view is... so beautiful.
From the bottom of this puddle
I'd never even noticed I'd been crying"
Your lack of caring was so subtle
"It's been two days
But I can still smell your perfume"
Still I miss you
Though your presence seems to loom
Another thought.
"It's been two days
But I can still smell your perfume"
Still I miss you
Though I feel your presence in the room
I really like your beginning:
"It's been two days
and I can still smell your perfume..."
Brings back memories of my own!
