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Week 25 ~ Pickle girl


 Anonymous
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Downpour from above
lifts this downtrodden soldier

and. . .

silent memories bring
thoughts from forever


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(@anonymous)
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I like this set of lines I think it will make a good song.

Silent memories bring
thoughts from forever

Frank


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(@tattooed)
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I can only think of one line for each.

Downpour from above
lifts this downtrodden soldier
The dryness of the desert

Silent memories bring  
thoughts from forever
Thoughts of love and peace


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(@acceptedone)
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Downpour from above
lifts this downtrodden soldier
The dryness of the desert
doused by living water

Silent memories bring  
thoughts from forever
Thoughts of love and peace
bonds that will not sever
love that's neverending
peace that's like a river

and if those suck... im sorry pickle.


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(@purple)
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If you read my response to the post of the assignment, you would know that I wrote an entire song with some one else's lyrics.  These lyrics were yours.  The soldier one really inspired me.  I do really like tattoed and accepted's creation, the desert addition is cool the rain waking the soldier.  This is how I saw them:

Downpour from above
Lifts this downtrodden soldier
Drops wake his sleeping soul
With dreams of getting older

It's not easy being green.... good thing I'm purple.


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