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Week 34: In Pittsburg

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Saber
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I've been getting into nirvana again for about the 14th time.
It doesn't exactaly use the burning bridge imagary, but there's one of a bridge, one of a burning, and the same general idea throughout.

In Pittsburg

I met you by chance
In amongst a dance
Crazed and without words
You got what you deserved.

You quenched all my fear
I can't see from here
the dust that's settled
on your grave
of all you took
and all you gave

I can do
what you do
I just have to burn
and think I'm new.

Living off sympathy
praying to infamy
saving your empathy
yearning for company

In heart.
In heart, take it all apart.

I love you my friend
I will until the end
but nothing can bridge
the world, our world
and now I'm bored
goodbye my friend.

I can do
what you do
I just have to burn
and think I'm new.

In heart.
In heart, take it all apart.

"Like the coldest winter chill. Heaven beside you. Hell within." -Jerry Cantrell


   
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lotto king
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hI

I like this good rhyme scheme through out

good writting

L,k

Aghhhh

Not only am I a senior citizen

I'm now a bloody senior member

Are you people trying to tell me I'm old or what ?

over 700 posts ( I really do need to get out more )


   
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