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WK 27 FALL WITH ME YOU KNOW YOU WANT TO

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(@guitargeek)
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I'm so tired but I got to let this out
But I cant think with all the noise in my ears
And you'd think that sleep would cure this
But even my dreams are full of fears
So since I met you I cant switch off
Thinking bout the next card and the next one
I wish I'd learnt from all of her games
But I guess I cant rest until I've won

Why does is have to be so taxing?
But simple is simply not good enough
Hurt me with your actions
Kill me with your love

We need the tears, they don't come for free
Well I know I do and I'm taking you down with me (taking you down with me)
We need the heartache, don't want to breathe
So when I fall you'll fall with me (fall with me)

Its only worse when I'm around you
But I always fail to set myself free
Someones twisted our hearts and minds
The poorest of poor are richer than me
Angels and demons don't go together
But you're here now and I cant help it
Your so pretty, wont last forever
I'll tear you apart bit by bit

Tell me what have I got to lose now?
I might as well give it a try
Mess with my emotions
Give me one good cry

We need the tears, they don't come for free
Well I know I do and I'm taking you down with me (taking you down with me)
We need the heartache, don't want to breathe
So when I fall you'll fall with me (fall with me)

I don't expect you to settle for this
But I didn't expect to settle for this x 2
Its just a consequence
Yes I messed up
He wont let me go
Coz I'm still young enough
So leave me alone
Nation after nation the same old story
situation the same old game
I dont want to live life this boring
I want someone to remember my name
And i'm sorry.....


   
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(@slowplay)
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Hey guitargeek,

Am I wrong in thinking that you're trying to capture a bit of the confusion of a man who's in a love/hate relationship. I could sense the confusion over whether to be angry with her or disappointed with himself. It was kinda hard to read because of it, but in this case that's good.

Criticism? Maybe some of the 'colaborative words' seemed a little forced, but it could just be 'cause I was looking for them. Other than that, a nice piece of work.

What kind of music are you thinking of?

Ice cream is a dish best served cold.


   
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(@guitargeek)
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hey thanks for the comments! this song is about Control in a relationship..this person has had one bad fall in past relationships and is still kind of bitter and has put the barriers up so instead of taking another risk with this person which he/she secretly wants to...they try to keep themselves at a distance and say to themselves im going to have my way with you.


   
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(@jadiny)
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good song gg as always :).
as with the other dude, what music you thinking of?

p.s why haven't you posted in ages.
keep posting anyway gg:D

Keep away from people who try to belittle your ambitions small people always do that, but the really great ones make you feel that you too, can become great.

--Mark Twain


   
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(@guerillacharlie)
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I thought you did well with the colaborative word "Angels and Demons" in the line "Angels and Demons dont go together" it struck me funny cause i had over thought so much over the word list. I also thought it was a love hate relationship, but good work.


   
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(@guitargeek)
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the music for this...would be very angry..kinda (i hate to use the word) but emo ish...i'm thinking the used/funeral for a friend.

And jadiny...glad you noticed!! hehe i dont post much in the other forum anymore because its a bit dead lately..the past few times ive posted..noone commented! But i will do soon..!


   
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