I haven't had much time to write anything this week with all the overtime I've had to work. But I jotted down some lyrics on one of my breaks the other day. Not finished with the words by any means and so far I've got a fast paced punk riff in my head.
Positive
Negative
It's time
to explore
These polar opposites
on the dance floor
They dip
they dive
It's hard to ignore
The obvious attraction
Oh, how much
they seem to adore
just being in
each others presence
Love like you've
never seen before
Hi glprattimages,
Looks like you've got some of the basics there as a start: where, and a bit of who.
Consider fleshing out in your mind who these dancers are and at what point of the relationship this moment takes place....first meeting? a cheating affair? arrived at the dance with someone else? taboo love? etc...
....so try to also tackle the angles of when? how? what? and why?
Thanks for sharing.
James
A good start and it's a good approach to just jot down what comes into your head. You can always come back to this later when you have more time.
Renee
