Y13W14 Zoom, Zoom, Zoom
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Chorus
Zoom, zoom, zoom...
The night is cold
Her lipstick and hair in place
Three hundred miles southeast of Reno
He’s full of cash
No questions asked
A lonely heart on the road
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There’s blood on the road
A smile smeared across his face
She’s a hit and run love machine
The head light’s smashed
Tire tracks across his back
But no one asked where he’s been
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One head light heading down the road
One head light out of control
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James, at about 2:42 there's the start of a very long pause. All the way to the end. Is the recording all there? I liked what I heard.
At first I thought this was all a metaphor. Then maybe not. Then, if not, why is she a love machine and why is he smiling?
Doesn't 300 miles southwest of Reno put us in the ocean? Kidding, but in trying to picture the setting, I'm not sure if we're near a city or in an empty desert area.
Renee
Hi Renee,
at about 2:42 there's the start of a very long pause. All the way to the end. Is the recording all there?
Yes, I have a new plugin that automatically adjusts the volume levels of a track, but I haven't figured out why it extends the mp3 versions an extra minute or so.
At first I thought this was all a metaphor. Then maybe not. Then, if not, why is she a love machine and why is he smiling?
Yes, it is a metaphor.
Prostitution is a dangerous joy ride.
What is "fun" short term has a negative long term impact.
Doesn't 300 miles southwest of Reno put us in the ocean? Kidding, but in trying to picture the setting, I'm not sure if we're near a city or in an empty desert area.
Oops, my bad. :oops: It was supposed to be Southeast of Reno :lol: :lol: :lol:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prostitution_in_Nevada
Shady Lady Ranch in Nye County, Nevada.
Thanks for the listen and post :D
James
Works for me.
Although the last line here
The head light’s smashed
Tire tracks across his back
But no one asked where she’s been
I think
But no one asked where he’s been
feels better in this context for me.
The recording definitely has that trucker atmosphere.
cheers
Paul
Hi Paul,
I think
But no one asked where he’s been
feels better in this context for me.
Agreed...I'll make the change later today.
Thanks!
James
POOF :mrgreen: changes made