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Y13W33 - I Never Liked to Drive That Much

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(@hobson)
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I wrote this mainly while camping and did a hurried recording when I got back. It's about slowing down and enjoying what's happening around us, which is what I was doing.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=832466&songID=13150728

verse:

We don't always need to be in a hurry.
All it does is make us worry.
Let's enjoy. Let's take delight
In slowing down to see the sights

chorus:

I never liked to drive that much.
I like to walk or take the bus.
Anyplace that isn't far,
I'd rather bike than drive my car.

verse:

We don't always need to multitask.
It makes the time go by too fast
And leaves us in a frazzled mess.
Victims of overload and stress.

chorus

verse:

We don't always need to be connected
Making those around us feel neglected.
Let's get off the phones and WiFi.
Let's look each other in the eye.

chorus

Renee


   
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(@jamestoffee)
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Hi Renee,

Good start :D

Vs 1 ties in the closest to the supporting the title. Verses 2-3 are off topic.

Consider using car slang/expressions -fast lane, rubberneckers, pull over, run a red, hit the brakes, tailgating, etc...

Thanks for sharing.

James


   
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