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(@lingdar)
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I made a YouTube video of making the song. Please check it out.
http://youtu.be/e0wr98oEcJI

The words are as follows
Can be seen on my new website
http://asylumoftruth.weebly.com/only-one-eye.html

Lyrics
Only one eye on the table
Where is my other damn eye
I ordered two blue eyes
Steamed with hints of garlic

Lousy service indeed
They deserve to see me
A real chef of humans
I cook better than they

Who doesn't serve two eyes
Soon to be slow roasted
Stuffed full of surgery apple slices
That's who only serves me one eye

O you will be sorry indeed
When your live is sautéed
As I drink your fresh blood
And nibble on your sweet spleen

But Sir it's a Cyclopes eye
Imported fresh from ain't isn't Greece
Very expensive and highly illegal
​After all Cyclopes are nearly extinct

But the menu said pair o eyes
This is just for you sir
I still want a free spleen
Of course sir I'll get Gavin's


   
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(@hobson)
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Points for creativity.

Renee


   
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(@celt)
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Like Renee said "Points for creativity"

Dark subject. Not often you hear a song about cannibalism.

The only criticism is it could a bridge or something to break it up some
but otherwise Good Job.

John

My SoundClick Page

Collaborations

" It's easier than waiting around to die" Townes Van Zandt


   
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(@lingdar)
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Thanks. I was thinking it may need to be broken up. A bridge is probably in order as I think I will do more with this song.
I'm working on making song around an asylum. And this was inspired by a patient my mother had who ate(regular food) uncontrollably and Hannover lector in a fanfic. If you go to http://www.asylumoftruth.com/phil.html you can read a bit about Phil the main voice in the song.


   
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