I made a YouTube video of making the song. Please check it out.
The words are as follows
Can be seen on my new website
http://asylumoftruth.weebly.com/only-one-eye.html
Lyrics
Only one eye on the table
Where is my other damn eye
I ordered two blue eyes
Steamed with hints of garlic
Lousy service indeed
They deserve to see me
A real chef of humans
I cook better than they
Who doesn't serve two eyes
Soon to be slow roasted
Stuffed full of surgery apple slices
That's who only serves me one eye
O you will be sorry indeed
When your live is sautéed
As I drink your fresh blood
And nibble on your sweet spleen
But Sir it's a Cyclopes eye
Imported fresh from ain't isn't Greece
Very expensive and highly illegal
After all Cyclopes are nearly extinct
But the menu said pair o eyes
This is just for you sir
I still want a free spleen
Of course sir I'll get Gavin's
Points for creativity.
Renee
Like Renee said "Points for creativity"
Dark subject. Not often you hear a song about cannibalism.
The only criticism is it could a bridge or something to break it up some
but otherwise Good Job.
John
Thanks. I was thinking it may need to be broken up. A bridge is probably in order as I think I will do more with this song.
I'm working on making song around an asylum. And this was inspired by a patient my mother had who ate(regular food) uncontrollably and Hannover lector in a fanfic. If you go to http://www.asylumoftruth.com/phil.html you can read a bit about Phil the main voice in the song.
