hello... :wink: you can find the photograph here:
Things are reverse.
Things are reverse
There's snow in the sky
And I'm half awake
On a destructive tide
Things are reverse
Thoughts pass me by
And I'm half-way thru
This incubation time
Then a voice on the phone hailing:
“It is breaking, it's breaking……upâ€
So what
Perhaps the ice is breaking up
Perhaps drunken beams alight the rocks
And paint pictures on the ocean, calm and quiet
Well, I can't share your excitement when
Over here there's still snow in the sky
Here things are reverse
You might've gone blind
But I'm half dead
With all this snow in the sky
And spring still lying in wait
I'd like a descent escape
hope someone likes it :D
cheers,
bluenightangel
p.s. ah...yes...the first two verses sound good with the melody of bright eyes' "messenger bird"(the part where it goes like "you sent me away...") :wink:
"oh, eventually it will break your heart" - anders wendin
I liked it, very descriptive imagery, especially your description of the ocean.
Bright eyes huh? I was imagining a Hendrix type vibe as I was reading it
Immature? Of course I'm immature Einstein, I'm 50 and in a Rock and ROll band.
New Band site http://www.myspace.com/guidedbymonkeys
Hey I like it too. I was going to do what you did and post a link to the pic so people could see where I got my inspiration from. But you beat me to it.. LOL
Keep up the beautiful work.
Geoo
“The hardest thing in life is to know which bridge to cross and which to burn” - David Russell (Scottish classical Guitarist. b.1942)
Bluenightangel,
Great photo
I like the song too. This seems a little different for you.
Well at least until the Bridge then you get into your style
at its best.
Very Good
John
Congrats Angel
this is a lovely song well done your lyrics are very well constructed and the flow is wonderful ..
Well done gurl
L.k
Aghhhh
Not only am I a senior citizen
I'm now a bloody senior member
Are you people trying to tell me I'm old or what ?
over 700 posts ( I really do need to get out more )
I like it, it's a lovely descriptive piece....
There's one word I'd change though,
Things are reverse
There's snow in the sky
And I'm half awake
On a destructive tide
Things are reverse
Thoughts pass me by
And I'm half-way thru
This incubation time.....
I'd be very tempted to change "incubation" to "hibernation" - fits perfectly with the imagery I got from the first verse....
Lovely writing....
:D :D :D
Vic
"Sometimes the beauty of music can help us all find strength to deal with all the curves life can throw us." (D. Hodge.)
:D so glad you all like it :D
vic, what you say is very interesting... hibernation... would definitely work, too....is a little less threatening/whatever... I think about it, okay? thanks for the suggestion. good idea.
thanks everyone
cheers
bluenightangel
"oh, eventually it will break your heart" - anders wendin