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(@straycat)
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hey. been busy and couldn't for the life of me put the bits and pieces i had into a somewhat acceptible form for the last weeks. and now this is pretty horrible(especially the second half). :? anyway, have to start posting again :wink:

when you can't communicate

a child in a smeared polaroid
upright on a wooden horse
eyes on the blurring line of asphalt and scarred sky

it's a hermit on a bicycle
circling the streets after nightfall
it's a dreamer trapped inside his dream
eyes on the river that cornered him

pencil letters huddled together
on a loose page

and, åh, åskan går
och floden börjar att viska

lost on a sidewalk with breath particles
like dust on deserted living room furniture
these foreign tongues in salted waves
wash over my night-time face

åh, åskan går
och floden börjar att stiga

if I hold my breath I might dissolve
blood-shot eyes watch as the river branches out

and, åh, åskan går
och floden stiger vidare

we are cornered by the river.

[once the paint recaptures the pavement
the water will evaporate, I know, the whisper will faint
but for now “the colour of summer at six in the evening” is forever escaping]

cheers,
straycat.

"oh, eventually it will break your heart" - anders wendin


   
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(@pearlthekat)
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this is nice. very poetic, as usual! not sure what it has to do with cowbys,though. but i guess it doesn't matter!


   
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(@citizennoir)
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Hey!
C'mon....
There was a wooden Horse, and a river! :D
Sounds like cowboy stuff to me! :wink:

Loved it - As Always!

I'll furthur comment later on a bit.

Ken

"The man who has begun to live more seriously within
begins to live more simply without"
-Ernest Hemingway

"A genuine individual is an outright nuisance in a factory"
-Orson Welles


   
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