Y9 W18 - My Electric Guitar

Hi Gixugif,

Good start....and for your first completed song :D Nice job at keeping it focused. What do you hear as far as music style?
probably because the topic for this week made it easy to keep this simple.

Amazing how a few choice words in the assignment seemed to get the creative juices flowing on the forum this week :D

Suggestion: Consider applying a rhyme scheme for the verses....it takes a bit more work at times but makes the images more memorable.

Thanks for sharing and welcome to SSG :mrgreen:

James

Hm, I don't see anyway to edit my original post.

I like the rhyming suggestion. I do have one verse that rhymes, but that's by accident. I was thinking about making the whole thing rhyme, but I was letting my laziness get the better of me. Probably not a good thing for a musician in general. I really like how it ended up though. Not only may it be more memorable, but I like the lyrics themselves better too, even though only a few words actually changed.

Musically I see it being a slow, blues-rock tune. Maybe something comparable to what you might hear in a George Thorogood song

Hm, I don't see anyway to edit my original post.
Look in the upper right corner of your post by your avatar or name and you'll find an edit button.

Yeah, thanks, I got it. I just couldn't do it until I had enough posts.