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Year 4 Wk 34 Part 2 Situation # 28

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 Celt
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The shortish version of the long story. I spent the last two
days running around picking up parts to repair damage
my daughter did to my car so it will pass our State safety
inspection. I also needed to renew the registration which
expired at the end of the month. Anyways after doing this
a waiting for said daughter to return with said vehicle so I
can replace the parts a get to the inspection station I get a
call that she was in another accident. Good news is she's OK
The bad news is my car is totaled. So instead of yelling and
screaming I wrote another song that I think might fit this
weeks assignment. The lyrics may sound a bit harsh but
that's just me venting. I'm not really thinking of "Burning
Bridges" with my daughter just getting out some anger.

Situation # 28

I ain't gonna take no more of this situation
I ain't gonna play no more of your foolish games
I don't need to hear none of your explanation
Any way you look it all comes out the same

I ain't got the time for one more sad I'm sorry
I ain't of the mind for one more run around
I don't want to listen to your fairy story
Waiting for the facts to come crashing down

Everything you touch always seems to end up ruined
Nothing you could say will help to ease my troubled mind

I ain't gonna take no more of this situation
I ain't gonna play no more of your foolish games
I don't need to hear none of your explanation
Any way you look it all comes out the same

That was cathartic,

John

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I like it, this is positive channeling of emotion, if I could change one line it would be line 2 from the following verse

I ain't got the time for one more sad I'm sorry
I ain't of the mind for one more run around
I don't want to listen to your fairy story
Waiting for the facts to come crashing down

I would change it too;

I ain't has you seem to think, made out of money

Just a suggestion....

Find all you need in your mind, If you take the time


   
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 Celt
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Spadge,

I like your suggestion but I think it may work
in another verse.

Just off the top of my head maybe something like:

This ain't the land of milk and honey
This ain't the way it's suppose to be
I ain't has you seem to think, made out of money
It's time for some changes Can't you see?

I might have to lose the "seem to" and go
with:

I ain't has you think, made out of money

It may fit the music I have in mind better.

Thanks

John

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