Ah its good to be back. Just rejoining after about 9 years! Time flies eh?
So - good intentions & all that.....
Titles:
On My Return
Look at the mess you made
A Map of The Story
Lunar Eclipse
hooky phrases: (not intended to be related to eachother, nor particularly to the titles)
A restoration project for a brand new start
gaffer tape and glue and a beat-up heart
wing it, you can fly, you can swing it if you try
I could swear my hands were dead and my wits had run away
Just a bystander, on a cold evening, on a rainy street,
its a hard memory, a hard memory
Just a bystander, on a cold evening, on a rainy street,
Its a good time to look around
I can see my way clear to living now
Slow slow rivers in the blood
Art is for the heart to paint a picture onto words
Cheers,
HagRider
Welcome Back
I like your suggestions.
My Favorites:
Look at the mess you made. This one could be about a relationship
or more literally to a child or pet.
That verse/chorus Just a by stander on a rainy street is interesting.
If nothing else it's just a good piece of poetry.
Slow slow rivers in the blood What's in those rivers? Whiskey? Heartache? Memories?
The possibilities are endless.
John
PS: Before James beats me to it Welcome Back could be another title.