8) job hurricane. is kinda funny too in that "ok your a bit of a looker,try avoiding four divorcesand a hooker" part.

mods, move it to the songwriting club. :wink: anyway, sozay, impressive stuff man. short and sweet lines. but the second verse needs work. good, good...

Ken, you're good at this nostalgic stuff pal. Good emotions there. m/Sachin

Hi jackal,don't change your first line. your revised first verse is better. the "volatile" kinda works as a metaphor too for any kinda political or si...

Hi Vic,Nice work for a week devoid of any inspiration. Liked the way you managed to get away by repeating the lines. heh heh, nice, really nice. hmm.....

Roberts, hi! Song 1 - The ForgeFind a place with an open viewWatch the Earth as she diesThe Forge of God has run us throughThe end of a world and a bi...

Hi scratch. I was listening to High and Dry by radiohead and thought of singing your lyrics to the song's melody. And man, it gelled in pretty good an...

Marv, you are so true to your user id :) At first look I went, wow, what a nice and hopeful spinoff on a disastrous theme (puns intended :lol: ) and ...

Sally, I liked the verses quite a lot. They were kind of very laidback, easygoing and yet charming but the chorus disappointed me. I honestly think yo...

vic pointed out some good ones. nice work overall gaz. add your finishing touch to it :) when will i ever wake up from this dream?ill forget what i th...

hey joshua pretty moody stuff. liked it man. first it felt like muse and towards the end more like some nu-metal (lp, etc.). sorry for my comparisions...

aah, feels like i'm pulling this one out from the grave. anyway, thought how the recent members would like this...so plz post away ppl..(and jacqui, t...

snoog, i think you wrote this just for the sake of writing. feels very poppy.

hi Ken. nice work. it has potential. maybe needs a lil restructuring. i can't exactly point out what needs to be worked upon right now. maybe shorten ...