"I have nothing to say and I'm saying it." LOL Yep, a lot to think about in that article. I got it from another online songwriting forum, thought I w...
Hi James,Agree with Dave's comments on the melody and feel of the song. I like the use of 3/4 time here, it also softens the blow. Great economy of wo...
Renee,Very nice melody and lovely singing. Interesting subject matter and direction, a lot of potential there. Andy
When I read through the lyrics I thought they would be hard to sing, but they fit the music. Nice guitar work too. Thanks Hobson!I'm with James on th...
BB was singing to 12 bar blues in my head, the phrasing fits well, very nice!
I haven't updated the recording yet (am thinking of adding some midi strings). Upon reflection at the end of the bridge I added:Grieving the lost and ...
....so I, as a listener, I can not really connect emotionally because I don't have a clear sense of what's going on....was the singer justified? delus...
Hi James,Admittedly I don't know much about current pop music either, the only time I hear it is when I'm in stores or getting my haircut, melodyne ...
This makes me think of Janis Joplin (R.I.P.) singing "Maybe" on the Ed Sullivan show March 16, 1969, looks like six and nine are my numbers :D
I like this. I like the change in form while keeping the direct address (you and I) perspective, it makes me think of the idea of reincarnation and t...
Well done! For me, its the blues, & that means a mixture of darkness, mystery and ambiguity.
3.1416 and 7.28 :lol: