Hi Jamir, thanks for the crit. The tenses are all fixed now.And I'm glad to be back :D .

It's got a great beat and I love the topic. I can hear this as a country or blue song even as I read it. I think there's a couple of typos you might w...

Yes, yes, this might be a bit late but welcome to the forum 8) And I'd have to agree, good for a first attempt, and needs a little work to make it be...

First time through, I just read the lyrics, which were haunting and sad. Then I heard the song, which made it even more beautiful. And sad, of course....

I'd say no as well, and also I happen to hate the White Strips to some degree too so ...(a 2 person band just scares me...plus I don't like their musi...

Yeah, I like the idea and the storyline. Now I want to see what you make of the song. :)-Laura

Wow, hey, I really like this! I hear country with this as well...and I'm probably just not reading deep enough, the line actually seems find to me. Bu...

Hey Scratch,Thanks for the suggestions! I think that's a great idea...but I would have never thought of it. Oh well. Now I know, and I feel so much be...

Yeah, 3 doors down, pop punk rock style for me. I especially like the chorus. There's a few spelling errors though that you might want to fix, but oth...

Yay! Thanks Bob, this is such fun!!! ;D ;)-Laura

Thanks for the feedback! I actualy wasn't thinking of selling soul to play guitar thing, but thanks Denim for the idea, and now actually that's sort o...

I really like the topic, a song like this could be really interesting and controvercial--good thing, good thing. Now about the song, yes, it does soun...