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Joined: Apr 7, 2003
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Re: Week 46 - Mispronunciation

Hi Mr Blue EyesCelt's advice about the Hunt line is worth taking.Chris is right in saying songs don't need to rhyme but they do need to be consistent....

17 years ago
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Re: SSG - Wk46 We Know Better In The Brotherhood

Hi RaySimply excellent lyrics on a strong theme -very well done.Musically I could make it fit with some minor chords for the verses and major for for ...

17 years ago
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Re: SSG Week 46 - Why Don't You Listen - with MP3

Hi NeilOnce again bang on for the assignment. This is very good. There's some killer lines in there but my favourite isand when I tell you I love yo...

17 years ago
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Re: Misquote - SSG46

Hi PearlThis is pretty good. I agree with Celt that more could be added but what you've got is pretty good. I hear it kind of spoken, Robbie Roberts...

17 years ago
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Re: Week 46 - Gardener Bill - with Mp3

Hi ChrisThis did make me laugh when I read it through. However, I did read it through a lot quicker than the MP3 sounded, as with most people I had t...

17 years ago
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Re: SSG 45 Writing a Song MP3

Hi CorlenyaPut me down for an a capella version also. Although I think something in there to keep the beat would be good as John suggests. The back ...

17 years ago
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Re: SSG Wk 45 - Keep It Simple + MP3

Hi RayThis is just superb - great song for this assignment and a really well done MP3. Loved itBob :wink:

17 years ago
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Re: SSG Week 45 First Song - Perfectionist Beginner Blues w/ MP3

Hi ChrisJust excellent - so enjoyable, so easy to relate to and so cleverly written. You've done the hard part and that's to get your first song done...

17 years ago
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Re: y5week45 watching trees sway

Hi StraycatI think this is one of the best songs you've put up here. It contains your usual rich imagery but combines it with a kind of situation eas...

17 years ago
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Re: Year 5 Wk 45 Simplest Of Pleasures

Hi JohnThis is a lovely piece, with a real heartfelt sentiment sticking out strongly. I understand you with the novelist analogy as it's what I tend ...

17 years ago
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Re: SSG Week 45 - Man of Action - with MP3

Ni NeilGreat work - made me smile a lot on the read through and then listening to the MP3 just made it better.Great stuffBob :wink:

17 years ago
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RE: SSG week 44 with MP3 ;)

Hi CorlenyaA very good first posting - I think David's points about cliches is spot on, they don't seem as obvious here you've worked it in well. Goo...

17 years ago
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RE: SSG Week 44 -

Hi Greatwhitneorthwelcome to SSG - glad you stopped by.Interesting take on the assignment but seems a bit too specific. Could there be an option to l...

17 years ago
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