Like Renee said "Points for creativity" Dark subject. Not often you hear a song about cannibalism.The only criticism is it could a bridge or somethin...

Neil,Thanks. You are correct the lines you mention are a bit cliche but to methey work off the line about sounding like some old country song. Espesia...

Thank You, NeilJohn

Not much to say but Wow!Great JobJohn

universal appeal. I like that! I had an on the road musician in mind but it could be a long haul trucker oranybody who has to travel for work.ThanksJ...

But writing it was cathartic. Yes it can be.

Wow I never thought of the spiritual aspect of it.Interesting take on the subject.

Thanks NeilI like the edit better too but wanted to leave the original up because it came togetherso fast and during a very busy time. The changes are...

I may not be the right person to critique this song. I lost two dear friends to pancreatic cancer sothe subject is close to my heart. That said I lik...

I like the minimalist approach to the lyrics.The minor pentatonic should give it a good feelto go along with the yearning feel of the lyrics.The last ...

OOPS Double Post

Thanks Renee,Magdalene refers to the Biblical Mary Magdalene or more so to the Legendarycharacter as much of what is believed about her in popular cul...