Thanks for the input. Yes that last verse isn't the greatest I was just trying to finish I guess.There was suppose to be a third verse before it trans...

1and 5 please

I'll chose 3!

Very Cool Concept!I thought this would have some sort of electronic arrangementbut really like the simple guitar and vocal.John

Thanks,This started out with the title and a fictitious woman named Chelsea and set in Boston.Once I changed the first line in all came "Home" so to s...

Kathy,Great Job! I particularly Liked the line about the fishing line.That uke has such a unique sound.John

Paul,I have to agree with the rest of the post. What you have is good but I'm left wanting a bit more of the story. The twist is great but you really ...

James,Good Job! After checking out EWorms link it sounds like an English translationof one of the commercials.John

James,Not much to add. The vocals do remind me of Peter Toshand that's a good thing.John

Renee,Just more of the same. I love the religion vs. spirituality concept but have some of the same problems with thephrasing as the others. You proba...

Thanks for the Comments!James, I agree a little more information may be good thing but I found I would have to really force it to fit the song.I'll ha...

Neil,Yes, It is very interesting to have two such different takeson the same concept. The one question I have is: Did Sallykeep the Mustang?Good JobJo...