You made me smile, John.Thanks. Well done.Neil

You've certainly made some progress since your last posting. Just some thoughts . . . . . . . your last 2 verses seem to be the beginning of the stor...

Hi John,Good rewrite. Your elimination of the "Martin" verse was a good self edit. In retrospect it didn't fit. Nice work.Neil

HI John,Nice to see you on the forum again. I really like this. Great descriptive verses and a nice story twist in the end. An idea for a slight tw...

A $10 mic on my PC using Audacity. Thanks for the comment.Neil

Thanks, John. Very much appreciated. Neil

Thanks, John. I totally agree with you.Neil

Thanks, Renee.Neil

Thanks John. Your comments are really appreciated.Neil

Thanks John.Neil