I don't really have music for it yet. I've been playing around with some chords (E, Am, D, D7, C7) but I have no idea what I want to do with the melo...

You're very talented. I have goosebumps. One thing you might consider changing is the line "in that en-darkened tomb" It feels a little unnatural, m...

The images are very vivid and strong, but you might consider revising to have a more consistant rhyme scheme. -coatbutton

It's very good. I felt the rhyme scheme was especially strong. I agree with 7cooka that these would work well as verses. - coatbutton

Wow. I got goosebumps reading this.

I've seen I'll Follow You Into The Dark played on an acoustic, and it sounded pretty good. I've played other Death Cab songs on electric with no dist...

I started playing on a fender squier passed down from my brother, but switched to a schecter omen-6 about six months ago. The schecter is very heavy,...

I know 2 other girls (really, they're women) who play guitar. And I know 11 guys who play guitar. So approximately 21% of the guitar players I know ...

It's very very good. I'm always amazed at people that can write powerful political songs. One thing you might consider is working in a few more syll...

(Unless you're a 14 year old boy or girl with parents who "just don't understand"...) I resent that! I'm a 14 year old girl, but that doesn't mean I...

I'm lucky I prefer to play electric, because I do have trouble with my Dad's acoustic. If she's sitting on the edge of her chair with a strap on the ...

I'm a girl guitarist! I'm very new to the site and kinda new to guitar. I started taking lessons about 3 months ago, but I've been playing for about...

For me, songwriting is a private thing. I was terrified to show any of my songs even to my best friend. It isn't difficult to tell people that you'r...