wow, lot's of comments, so I don't think I'll read through all of them, forgive me if I repeat anything.The first was the line "oft times I thought I'...

I like the original line better, more poetic and less straightforward, though maybe:A listening ear in a city (grown) colderorA listening ear in a cit...

under a plant vs a hill - i put this in plant because there is a little plot point about God sending a plant for shade on that hill for Jonah, then ki...

Good song. I like the moral conflict within, and I think it could exist despite a person being of any theological disposition that says it's ok... th...

unlike Vic, I'm seeing something up tempo here (I was listening to Franz Ferdinand this morning, so maybe that's just what's in my head), but to echo ...

but it's batman!! we all love his temper and he hates guns... I vote for punching a hole in the guys face. Batman punches cops sometimes. Sorry, som...

oh, and definitely keep the Jekyll Hyde... definitely fits the theme, I would guess the Hulk was based off that anyway

very nice James... as I was reading it, I was thinking this should be hard rock song and was expecting you to use your usual acoustic style - thanks f...

Vic, I think I have to agree with you. At some level, while writing the song, I struggled with it a lot on this one. But after having a more "finis...

sorry, we all feel for you Cindy.

on't be too hasty...the bin's a harsh fate. agree with Vic here... actually, I think I like the imagery of a soul rising to heaven and seeing Satan o...

looks good. as to humor, could be in how you perform it - see the Squirrel Nut Zippers song "Afterlife", which has a similar tone lyrically, yet come...

kung fu and karati... man, I was hoping to see that in the movie... why is it that the devil always sells musicianship in the movies, and never awesom...