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contagiousjerm
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Joined: Dec 14, 2008
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Re: Y8 W8 - Solstice Day.

wow, lot's of comments, so I don't think I'll read through all of them, forgive me if I repeat anything.The first was the line "oft times I thought I'...

14 years ago
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Re: Y8W8 Smiles

I like the original line better, more poetic and less straightforward, though maybe:A listening ear in a city (grown) colderorA listening ear in a cit...

14 years ago
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Re: wk39 - Jonah meets God

under a plant vs a hill - i put this in plant because there is a little plot point about God sending a plant for shade on that hill for Jonah, then ki...

15 years ago
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Re: Y7 Week 40 - Witness - Dylan Barrett

Good song. I like the moral conflict within, and I think it could exist despite a person being of any theological disposition that says it's ok... th...

15 years ago
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Re: Y7week39/40 two straws

unlike Vic, I'm seeing something up tempo here (I was listening to Franz Ferdinand this morning, so maybe that's just what's in my head), but to echo ...

15 years ago
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Re: Yr 7 Week 41 - A Superhero's Life

but it's batman!! we all love his temper and he hates guns... I vote for punching a hole in the guys face. Batman punches cops sometimes. Sorry, som...

15 years ago
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Re: Y7W41 I Hate You

oh, and definitely keep the Jekyll Hyde... definitely fits the theme, I would guess the Hulk was based off that anyway

15 years ago
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Re: Y7W41 I Hate You

very nice James... as I was reading it, I was thinking this should be hard rock song and was expecting you to use your usual acoustic style - thanks f...

15 years ago
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Re: wk 39 - Devil In Me

Vic, I think I have to agree with you. At some level, while writing the song, I struggled with it a lot on this one. But after having a more "finis...

15 years ago
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Re: Y7Wk39 Ugly as Sin

sorry, we all feel for you Cindy.

15 years ago
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Re: SSG week 39

on't be too hasty...the bin's a harsh fate. agree with Vic here... actually, I think I like the imagery of a soul rising to heaven and seeing Satan o...

15 years ago
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Re: Y7W39 How I Spent My Afterlife

looks good. as to humor, could be in how you perform it - see the Squirrel Nut Zippers song "Afterlife", which has a similar tone lyrically, yet come...

15 years ago
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Re: Y7 W39 - Me And Ol' Beelzebub.

kung fu and karati... man, I was hoping to see that in the movie... why is it that the devil always sells musicianship in the movies, and never awesom...

15 years ago
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