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Ellenback
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Joined: Jun 10, 2007
Topics: 2 / Replies: 24
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RE: Tunnel of Time

I like it, Hilch - have you tried to record using two tracks, at all? Do the guitar, and then play it back thru headphones, and record the singing - ...

17 years ago
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RE: Mirage of a Man: Week 36

You two may be quite right - the dredging was a bit of a stretch. I was actually going for 'digging' - but not at the beach, as Hilch said, but at th...

17 years ago
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RE: SSG Week 36 - Trapped - with MP3

I love the chorus, or the italicized part, especially, in this song Neil. I'd almost want to build the song around those parts, because there the wri...

17 years ago
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RE: Wk36--Choices

Joe,This is wonderful. I like the summation you use in the first stanza, of tickling becoming scarring, I love the words you use to demonstrate your ...

17 years ago
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RE: SSG5 Week 35 - Reparation ( MP3 Added )

Fantastic, Rob, I really love your writing style - you have such visuals that come across, subdued, and yet strong, at the same time. Something I'm a...

17 years ago
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RE: SSG Week 35 - Hard Sell To Get To Paradise - with MP3

Great words, Neil, I identify with, "I don't think it's rightto lose your sight looking into the sunwhen we could spend our time herehaving some fun"b...

17 years ago
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RE: SSG5 - Week35 - Hard Sell - with mp3 (bass line)

It's just gorgeous, no quibble with anything in it....It so needs a bass line to it, and I do want to hear it again if you are able to convince someon...

17 years ago
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RE: SSG5 - Week35 - Hard Sell - with mp3 (bass line)

Paul,I really agree with Hilch - that one verse is the gist of the entire song, and coming from a marketing/events background, I know about having goo...

17 years ago
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RE: Hard Sell { WEEK 35} NOW MP3 sorry

You're NOT getting my credit card #, Hilch...! What, NO E7 chord? LOLYou might think of taking off the 'if' at the beginning of the fourth line, and t...

17 years ago
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RE: SSG Week 35 - "(Hard to) Sell Yourself

My skirt is NOT too short...LOL I like this, a lot, Reincarnate...the only part I have trouble with is the 'shelf' word, and that's just a bias. I tr...

17 years ago
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RE: Tan and Grey: Week 34

Thank you, Joe! I'm a singer from way back, so that's my comfort zone...it's the writing of the lyrics that I'm working on tightening up.Hilch did in...

17 years ago
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RE: Tan and Grey: Week 34

Thank you, Bob! I updated the vocals, again, on soundclick, as I had some grinders in the file as it stood, if you're interested, and it gives me a ...

17 years ago
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RE: SSG Week 34 - Easy

I like this, as well, Doug...just needed to mull it over to see what it was that grabbed me. The words are full of images, and I particularly was gra...

17 years ago
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RE: SSG Week 34: Motto

Agreed, DrunkRock, that "is" to end on is a killer, rhyming-wise! But you made it work, Pete, and I can see it being sung this way...it's not a jarri...

17 years ago
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