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Re: Mortar Jungle -- first song / help wanted :-)
A couple of quick comments:You might try to keep the same rhyme scheme for the verses. Also try reading what you've written out loud or having someon...
15 years ago
Re: Y7Wk21 Song Titles
Lotta good ones in there.
15 years ago
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Re: SSG - Week 45 - Rob
pretty good use of imagery. reminded me of Gollum in the Hobit. i liked the Authurian allusion. you might want to revise your chorus to use some im...
21 years ago
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21 years ago
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