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Florence
@florence
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Joined: Nov 11, 2004
Topics: 8 / Replies: 9
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18 years ago
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RE: Hot Cycle ( another one...sorry!)-

Thanks Lotto- completely agree have amended

19 years ago
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RE: Drop your hands (opinions!?)- its a bit of a nasty one

Am reallyt glad you are enjoying it! I have put it to a waltz like beat- 3 4 time which picks up in the chorus (as you said) :lol: Happy Christmas to ...

19 years ago
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RE: --->I'm a newbie--->My first song; Hugs and Kisses

THis is really good! Only one thing I would say is I am not sure that the title "hugs and kisses" is a good one, but its up to you and I think you lef...

19 years ago
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RE: Drop your hands (opinions!?)- its a bit of a nasty one

Thanks guys- I just sometimes feel my writing is really trite- like when I listen to some songs by people like sheryl Crow or say U2 (esp. the song st...

19 years ago
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RE: Walking- Let me know what you think!

:D Thanks Gaz- the music is proving the problem!!

19 years ago
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RE: Kristy.

I agree witrh Gmilan- Its a great beginning but needs a bit more meat how about something like this- Kristy, oh kristy dearIs it lust or love from yo...

20 years ago
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RE: Hand me down shoes

:D I think this is really good/great. My only criticism (being v. pinikity) is in Verse 4? when you drop in T-shirts-having concentrated on shoes from...

20 years ago
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