Not at all- have fun

Thanks Lotto- completely agree have amended

Am reallyt glad you are enjoying it! I have put it to a waltz like beat- 3 4 time which picks up in the chorus (as you said) :lol: Happy Christmas to ...

THis is really good! Only one thing I would say is I am not sure that the title "hugs and kisses" is a good one, but its up to you and I think you lef...

Thanks guys- I just sometimes feel my writing is really trite- like when I listen to some songs by people like sheryl Crow or say U2 (esp. the song st...

:D Thanks Gaz- the music is proving the problem!!

I agree witrh Gmilan- Its a great beginning but needs a bit more meat how about something like this- Kristy, oh kristy dearIs it lust or love from yo...

:D I think this is really good/great. My only criticism (being v. pinikity) is in Verse 4? when you drop in T-shirts-having concentrated on shoes from...