I liked this one!It also depressed me which is good because it made me feel some emotion.I am sad because of what you wrote....I am happy because you ...
Like the concept of the song. I think I understand it as it is easier to share your faith when you are with other believers but harder when you are ou...
Hey GG,Dug the tune!I like the perspective.Good job!
Thanks for the info Undercat and Forrok...That site is very cool.From Ibanez they reccomend that you change only one string at a time. I did all six a...
I thought it was more of an introspective look at self worth. I didn't pick up the wife thing, but that's ok. It definately works on both levels. I th...
DD,Look forward to the completed one.I think you have a real good start!
Here's one definition from the dictionary for poetry..."A piece of literature written in meter; verse"doesn't sound too different from lyrics"relating...
The truth runs deeper than what meets the eyeAnd I wonder why you care I think you are speaking to God in this line....but "You" has referred to the ...
well.....Here's my 2 cents.It's interesting to find the numbers on the wall and wonder what they are really like and if they're real. It would have be...
Hey DD,You have a good start here but it needs to be developed some. Needs a chorus.It seemed to jump to the "Your'e not here" part too quick.Seems li...
Well Rock on then!There are many songs that use the same words in them. As long as it stands on its own, go for it!The Merriam Webster Unabridged Dict...
I agree about the chorus. It is not as strong as the verses.Just an idea on the chorus....fight for your countryWorlds away you're aloneDesperate for ...
Pardon,I agree with Lotto on this one. Good change on "you hang on my every word, This is really quite absurd"The little changes for me would be more ...
I dug the flow of it.If it is too close to the Clapton thang, you could always say "I can't take it"