One of the things I've always struggled with is getting the lyrics and the music to fit together. So I took James' idea and laid a few tracks down. I'...

Wow that's a lot of rhymes. It's definitely a very original direction to take this topic and I like it! I haven't had the chance to listen to the soun...

I know I'm late on this but I'm sorry to hear about Marilyn. I gave your track a listen and you definitely nailed the harmonies. I'm curious what you ...

With a lot of celebrities passing recently, this song seems appropriate. The song appears to be written from the point of view of a fan of the artist....

It looks good Neil.I'm not sure what you have in mind for music but when I read it, I heard a soft ballad in my head. Possibility an opera.

I appreciate everyone taking the time to provide feedback on this one. Subtlety is always hard since what makes sense to you won't make sense to anyon...

The song flows really well. I'm definitely hearing a rap song on this one.Further to the personalization comments. I would try adding more to these li...

The song flows really well. I'm definitely hearing a rap song on this one.Further to the personalization comments. I would try adding more to these li...

I'm not sure if this was your intention but when I read it, I thought of Gotham City (Batman). The verses were great and make a strong political state...

I like the subtlety of your imagery as it wasn't completely obvious who you were righting about but I eventually got it. Props to the imperfect rhymes...