Really like this one! Sends little shiver of fear down the spine...

Yes - its supposed to be contrast between the "little princess" daughter of the family & the girl. I need to clarify that more though - as you are...

Trust me - I'm female - wet lips & dry hands is WAY more disgusting.... 8) "princess on board" is supposed to be one of those stupid car-rear-wind...

Good point Paul - I'll try it that way. But will probs use "this is going nowhere" rather than "I'm going nowhere" - not sure why tho

So the story I am getting from it is that a girl has got in a taxi rather than wait in a long bus/tube queue & her imagination is running riot (fu...

Ditto - I need to hear this. With the right music it could be wonderful

Hmmm - I like it as it is. I don't think it needs to go anywhere. Its about that moment before you start - so it seems right that the whole song is ro...

Finally catching up on the actual recording stage....Yes, Renee, the singer is painting a portrait, and in the absence of any real interaction from th...

Hi ReneeI really like that - its very true to life!All those notes and the calendar that arent where they should be & so are of no use at all - so...

Thanks JamesYou're right - I've missed an opportunity there by not utilising that spotlight, I don't think I want to repeat the "forgetmenot" there - ...

Cheers Andy - its a swine of a disease isnt it!As to the music - that's the bit I struggle with. I sort of know how I want the phrasing to go & wh...

Re the grammarI think the following is valid:"Nurses speak kindly with a singing voice"because "kindly with a singing voice" is describing the way the...