some good stuff here mate, the title suggests that it's quite dark but i like the idea of the way you seem to be building up to each screamed line.doe...

Theres only one greatest and his name's Bob.like ive plastered over the front of my songbook.DYLAN IS GODSTOP THE TRAFFIC.

leave it with me and i'll try to get something posted that you can listen to.cheershurricane

its quite simple, a wee kinda folk song telling a story.just c em dm c repeated all the way through the song.each four lines are one verse.and ive add...

cheers for looking over this.i'll try to explain how it goes.its basically just three verses with a variation of the bridge, and what im calling a cho...

good point but i kinda like that flaoting between tenses,as in im telling a story but the main message is directly towards her.