I think I would call it"Finding me"and continue along that theme :)

lottoking..... IMHOA poem is a lyric waiting for music[/Hey cool, :lol: lucy

wanna let you know that I have read your lyric, but will be better if I post tomorow. HmmmmmmmmmmmmOne is one too many :lol: :lol: lucy

Hi guys,It was suggested to add another verse to it and change the last two lines in the verses. Do you think it works better as posted above or this ...

Nothing to add except , nice lyric. :)

loved this........Well I took no judas silver For my dignity and pride Liked the story line, looking forward to hearing it :)

Hi Here's my 2 cents , :) Sometimes i wish i could step out of time Put back my heart and take (back) whats mine Sit (back) on (my/our) shore, (and) ...

Thanks again Guys,Now to find some music........

Thank-you Alan for the comments and suggestion lucy :)

Poor Rosie...... She picks up old letters Stands alone in the hall Defenceless and oldWith No-one to call Feeling lonely and sadSits on a worn out set...

Thanks Guys, I made the couple changes you suggested and I see what you mean by it needing another verse or something :D btwlucy :)

Forgot to metion it still seems more like dying than just leaving and coming back.Both are quite emotionalLucy :)