hey Beans, just had a listen, great music! I liked it. I have one suggestion; this is your strongest lyrical line. the closure point of the lyrics wh...

Remember though, when your singing songs that relate to god and christianity, imagery is less important because its one of the vary rare times when th...

Love it. your words ring with such truth and power- and the imagery and symbolic metaphors are amazing- unforgettable. I can only hope to create songs...

nice. Very nice. :) you've really captured the event from so many different angles; doesn't really matter about the length lol, its cool I like it. I...

aww, the second one is so sad :( I was all in this dancing, jolly mood from 'Give me from last Chance' and then ya hit me with that beautiful, touchin...

hi Jamir :) I love reading your songs; and this one was no exception. the thing I loved about this one was that by the time I was hit with the endin...

Hi Daved! I like the way your song has a sort of 'uncharted flow' without a strict rhyming scheme; it gives the song a really true to experience edge....

hi urbnite! Its great to have a song that as you say, is completely open to interpretation and can mean something to everybody.... great work.the shor...

hi jamir, thanks for your reply :) I have been thinking for a while about joining the SSG forum, I think it would be a really great way to explore ...

In a word; unforgettable. This song is beautiful, flows wonderfully and i agree that whatever you did in those 5 years was worth the wait. at last, ...

does anyone necessarily have to 'own' a song that is written? A song; lyrics or music; is a voice that speaks from behind reason. Why put labels to it...

hey stefhy, firtly I agree... your poem is true and from the heart.. and no-one can ask for more :) and I must say I'm impressed, the wording and ima...

an interesting topic!I find that songs that come from inspiration, come from a place that expresses true emotion, and often mark a true journey of cre...