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Re: Y13W42 Anywhere (In This Small Town)

I do think it comes across with more focus this way. Of course, I really liked it before, too, so maybe my opinion doesn't count for much. :lol: Ok...

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Re: Y13W42 Anywhere (In This Small Town)

Hi David, Thanks for the listen and feedback :DI changed the title to "Anywhere (In This Small Town)"...and ***POOF*** :mrgreen: Bridge cutDoes that ...

7 years ago
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Re: Y13W41 Marsh Mellow Man

Hi David,Banjo or some East Asian stringed instrument? Banjo. I brought it back to Bangkok from our US trip. :mrgreen: The verses don't, pardon the ...

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Re: Y13W33 Never Did Like That Much

Hi Renee,don't understand "welcomed the wise." So now I"m also confused about "I could fly." Agreed it's not very clear. The idea was the johns/clien...

7 years ago
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Re: Y13W33 - I Never Liked to Drive That Much

Hi Renee, Good start :DVs 1 ties in the closest to the supporting the title. Verses 2-3 are off topic. Consider using car slang/expressions -fast lan...

8 years ago
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Re: Y13W33 Never Did Like That Much

Hi Renee, I imagined the singer as a person forced into prostitution as a matter of survival.-James

8 years ago
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Re: New guy.. First submission

it was supposed to be resolution, that he understands and feels sorry for what he put her through, and also that without her finally walking away and ...

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