Last seen: Apr 30, 2022
Thanks, David.
3 please :D
I do think it comes across with more focus this way. Of course, I really liked it before, too, so maybe my opinion doesn't count for much. :lol: Ok...
Hi David, Thanks for the listen and feedback :DI changed the title to "Anywhere (In This Small Town)"...and ***POOF*** :mrgreen: Bridge cutDoes that ...
Hi David,Banjo or some East Asian stringed instrument? Banjo. I brought it back to Bangkok from our US trip. :mrgreen: The verses don't, pardon the ...
Hi Renee,don't understand "welcomed the wise." So now I"m also confused about "I could fly." Agreed it's not very clear. The idea was the johns/clien...
Hi Renee, Good start :DVs 1 ties in the closest to the supporting the title. Verses 2-3 are off topic. Consider using car slang/expressions -fast lan...
Hi Renee, I imagined the singer as a person forced into prostitution as a matter of survival.-James
it was supposed to be resolution, that he understands and feels sorry for what he put her through, and also that without her finally walking away and ...