whoops !!! ok back to the drawing board... in the words of "ol Nick" himself.... if i have to explain it, re write it Thanks for the comments , but i ...

Hi there Vic,love the lyrics, but I do not envy you singing the beelzebub in a song .... was trying it out and found it a serious tongue twister for m...

OK took all the suggestions pasted them into my lyrics and suddenly a lot of it changed, so please if you have the time have a look before I get going...

Thanks so much Chris...... such nice people here !!!!!! will re work it tomorrow when I have written all these great ideas out. Watch this space :D

Excellent suggestion... thanks :idea:

Thanks for your input James , much appreciated... i was once told by Nick if i had to explain it, re write it :lol: The first verse is the MAN... and...

Thanks John,Still scratching my head over this one :?

Hi'aNo it is not that bad at all. I like the chorus, very jingley like one would imagine Tom to sing. I do have a bit of a problem with the verses. Gr...

Kwela means "get up" in Xhosa / Zulu , and what happened was........in the old days they used to put the penny whistlers on the street corners everywh...

Sure, Kwela originated in south Africa in the 50's played on a penny whistle through the side of the mouth. Avery african township contagious sound w...

I think you got something good here Vic, THe different length lines threw me a bit to start with and i had to re read the verses to try and get a soli...