Hey there Scratch,Can just hear this one love the 2nd verse , about even selling the strings.... shame !!!!!!!! Reminds me of my ex - he sold just abo...

A lot of thought obviously went into this one with a good structure. Personally I feel it is a tad philisophical for a song, not sure if a listener ( ...

Good simple clean lyrics, just the way I like it !!!!!! simple but catchy melody too, I can just imagine sitting on that ol' creeky porch swing on a h...

Hi'aThanks a ton, I love the chorus, the repetitive 13 and the melody makes a real good hook.On the constructive side , not much I can add that has...

Thank you both for the comments, appreciate your imput. :) Go wellJa'mir

I await with baited breath for a re write.......... like what you have so far.I can really relate to the words living in the Middle East ....... can'...

Hey Chefie ,where is the link for the MP3. Would love to hear it. But I must be getting old and blind, looked everywhere and can't see the link. :? Ja...

I think all has been said. One small thing ..... I love the way you have repeated " fighting for" at the end of the chorus to make it a double statem...

Hey Joe,It sounds like you had lots of fun doing this one........ makes me wish I could step out of my folk comfort zone, well done. Only constructive...

OK sorry ---- didn't get the jumping part as the phrase" paint the town red" actually means to go partying!!!! maybe in the USof A it has a difere...

Hi'a Marv,Your songs always "sound good" when heard, because your style is so unique. ( compared to boring old folkies like myself ) I do feel the me...

Welcome to the group !!!!!I like the laid back feel to the song and agree with Vic on that one line , not overly natural............unless you are Iri...

Well vic,I think this one really does " SOUND" good from reading it I like the way you have added "in my head" it adds to the feeling evoked in the s...