Thanks for the comments people, It is actuslly about the plight of the african people in South Africa, sorry not Pakistan , althouogh their plights a...
Hi'aAs a package it is nice, there are a few lines I am stumbling over, but knowing how you always fit them in the the melodies you create, I will wai...
Unbelievable,really catchy, lovely to listen to, excellent lyrics, supurb backing , definately on my want to hear again and again list of songs !!!!Th...
Hi'a Ed,Well I like your ideas here, but I find the song very long and complex at this stage....... don't take that in a negative way. I tend to say t...
I think the whispers and maybe's would add a lot to a lovely poignant song, go for it !!!!! it adds to the mystery of what if's , or if only's It is e...
Hey Man on the side,I know you play well, so I hope we are going to get a sample of this !!!!!Go wellJa'mir
Hi'a Blue,I am really battling to find a constant rhythm to the lyrics here, , but as you know i am one of those who prefer your simple ones !!!!! not...
Sorry it has taken me so long to post again on this topic. My hands are really full at the moment.The response has been great and I am working on a fe...
I have to agree with Slowplay re the imagry bit, song writing is painting a picture in words !!!!!!!!!!!!!!Melodies etc are something else completely,...
Hi'a Doug,I was also put off in the first verse,but carried on reading as your work is always a grand read and the meter always runs so smothly off t...
Hey Doug,Glad to see you around again....... :lol: I have tried out your suggestions and do agree about it sounding better in the third person, howeve...
and I thought I was the only grandparent on this forum !!!!!! whew !!!! that is a relief :lol:
Hi'a WhitneyzeldowYour point is very valid, but if you are listening ( not reading a song ) it would have the same effect unless it had an amazing mel...
I gotta agree with Nick there, he once gave me some advice I have never forgotten. If one person doesn't like it there are probably 100 others who fee...