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jamir
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Joined: May 11, 2003
Topics: 57 / Replies: 377
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RE: SSG3 - week 43 - YANNI - Jamir

Thanks for the comments people, It is actuslly about the plight of the african people in South Africa, sorry not Pakistan , althouogh their plights a...

19 years ago
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RE: Wk 43 What You Think That I Want You To Say/Mp3 by Smokindog

Hi'aAs a package it is nice, there are a few lines I am stumbling over, but knowing how you always fit them in the the melodies you create, I will wai...

19 years ago
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RE: SSG3 Week 43 - Dig

Unbelievable,really catchy, lovely to listen to, excellent lyrics, supurb backing , definately on my want to hear again and again list of songs !!!!Th...

19 years ago
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RE: ssg-week-43-break the barrier

Hi'a Ed,Well I like your ideas here, but I find the song very long and complex at this stage....... don't take that in a negative way. I tend to say t...

19 years ago
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RE: Week 43--Only Words To You

I think the whispers and maybe's would add a lot to a lovely poignant song, go for it !!!!! it adds to the mystery of what if's , or if only's It is e...

19 years ago
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RE: SSG Week 43 - A breath is all it takes / MP3

Hey Man on the side,I know you play well, so I hope we are going to get a sample of this !!!!!Go wellJa'mir

19 years ago
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RE: Y3week43 the weakest link

Hi'a Blue,I am really battling to find a constant rhythm to the lyrics here, , but as you know i am one of those who prefer your simple ones !!!!! not...

19 years ago
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RE: Needing colaboration on a song...........any takers

Sorry it has taken me so long to post again on this topic. My hands are really full at the moment.The response has been great and I am working on a fe...

19 years ago
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RE: Not Listening

I have to agree with Slowplay re the imagry bit, song writing is painting a picture in words !!!!!!!!!!!!!!Melodies etc are something else completely,...

19 years ago
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RE: SSG3 Week 42 Doug Joy

Hi'a Doug,I was also put off in the first verse,but carried on reading as your work is always a grand read and the meter always runs so smothly off t...

19 years ago
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RE: The Good Times * NOW WITH MP3 *- Jamir SSG 3-42

Hey Doug,Glad to see you around again....... :lol: I have tried out your suggestions and do agree about it sounding better in the third person, howeve...

19 years ago
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RE: Year 3 Wk 42 The Hardest Part withMp3

and I thought I was the only grandparent on this forum !!!!!! whew !!!! that is a relief :lol:

19 years ago
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RE: I want to ask about the"many views vs few comments"

Hi'a WhitneyzeldowYour point is very valid, but if you are listening ( not reading a song ) it would have the same effect unless it had an amazing mel...

19 years ago
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RE: I want to ask about the"many views vs few comments"

I gotta agree with Nick there, he once gave me some advice I have never forgotten. If one person doesn't like it there are probably 100 others who fee...

19 years ago
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