Thanks for all the positivity guys :DMust try set music to this at some point.Jay

Was debating over that line, good alteration though. What I meant was their jaws dropped when they saw the sunrise, but it's not clear enough so I'll ...

Race to the sunOne last dayThe executioner's lullabyBarnyard bluesFishing for freedom

Hey,The ghost thing was getting to me too, guess I'll change that. Thanks for the comments :)

I really really like this, considering how it was made and all it's a solid achievement.The chorus is my favourite part, with the rhyming and Elvis an...

Hmm, thanks for the comment. :)I like your suggestion about the end of the verses, think I will change that. I also wasn't entirely sure about that li...