Hey LKHaving the opportunity to read through everyone's posts, I'm up to speed on the "Happy Chappy, Bloody, and the hell" questions. I was leaning ...
Hey pbee,Very nice. The whole thing works well. Music yet? 8) Jojo
Hi MysticThere is definitely some pain being dealt with in your lyrics. I'm sure that was your intent and if so, nice job! I like it! It is prob...
Hey FolksThanks for all your input! I appreciate both the compliments and the critiques. I do have a cross of sea and land things going here. It's ...
Hey JoeNice work on the "Phaser to Stun" rewrite. I also like "Rewind". Brings up the old coming or going paradox that most everyone can relate to a...
Hey SozayI like it. Generates questions, carries emotion. The "absence, always present" lines are nice. Good work!
Hey pbee!I really like the rewrite and the song sounds great. Nice work!
Hey JoeThanks for the feedback and the heads-up on "angles vs angels". I totally missed it. Should have caught it before I posted. Geometric shapes...
Hey Celt,Great job. You can almost smell the smoke in the air!
Hey pbee,Nice job! I was thinking the "May 15" was tough. I like what you did with it. MP3 sounds good. Turn it Up!
Hey pbee!Thank you, I appreciate it! It's a fun project.
Thanks SlowPlayWorks well without "yet and there's". Nice and smooth. Thanks for the input!
Thanks for the suggestions!I have to agree, the "yet" needs to go.