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jojolargo
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Joined: Feb 25, 2005
Topics: 3 / Replies: 13
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RE: Happy Chappy ( dedicated to Lippy ) WEEK 32

Hey LKHaving the opportunity to read through everyone's posts, I'm up to speed on the "Happy Chappy, Bloody, and the hell" questions. I was leaning ...

19 years ago
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RE: Week 31 - "Dreams Die Hard (The Celt)"

Hey pbee,Very nice. The whole thing works well. Music yet? 8) Jojo

19 years ago
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RE: Emotional Elusion (pbee) week 32(revised)

Hi MysticThere is definitely some pain being dealt with in your lyrics. I'm sure that was your intent and if so, nice job! I like it! It is prob...

19 years ago
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RE: WK 31 Gravel Roads (title by SlowPlay)

Hey FolksThanks for all your input! I appreciate both the compliments and the critiques. I do have a cross of sea and land things going here. It's ...

19 years ago
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RE: Week 32--Your Paralyzing Stare Set To Stun

Hey JoeNice work on the "Phaser to Stun" rewrite. I also like "Rewind". Brings up the old coming or going paradox that most everyone can relate to a...

19 years ago
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RE: Week 32 - Opening night

Hey SozayI like it. Generates questions, carries emotion. The "absence, always present" lines are nice. Good work!

19 years ago
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RE: Week 32 "Angels & Demons" rewrite - mp3 link

Hey pbee!I really like the rewrite and the song sounds great. Nice work!

19 years ago
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RE: WK 30 Portia & pbee

Hey JoeThanks for the feedback and the heads-up on "angles vs angels". I totally missed it. Should have caught it before I posted. Geometric shapes...

19 years ago
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RE: Year 3 Wk 30 This Grudge,I'm Going To Hold

Hey Celt,Great job. You can almost smell the smoke in the air!

19 years ago
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RE: Week 30 - "May 15th" (SlowPlay,Karla) - mp3 link

Hey pbee,Nice job! I was thinking the "May 15" was tough. I like what you did with it. MP3 sounds good. Turn it Up!

19 years ago
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RE: WK 30 Portia & pbee

Hey pbee!Thank you, I appreciate it! It's a fun project.

19 years ago
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RE: Titles and Choruses

Thanks SlowPlayWorks well without "yet and there's". Nice and smooth. Thanks for the input!

19 years ago
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RE: Titles and Choruses

Thanks for the suggestions!I have to agree, the "yet" needs to go.

19 years ago
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