Some clever ideas, James, especially the stuttering.I'll have to play with it and see if I can pull it off.Thanks for the input (no pun intended).

I like it, Neil.Nice beat, simple melody (I like simple) :D I also like Jame's suggestions.Maybe a combination of "you" and "us"?

Thanks, HobsonThat could make a fifth verse . . . and then repeat the first verse . . . as a chorus?I'm thinking of stealing "All Along the Watchtower...

Hey, there's too much truth in this . . . yes, it is sad.I’m thinking I need an upgradeMore memory, more storage, more RAMI fear if this downgrade con...

Thanks, JamesI'll see if I can make more computer references.Here's a third verse:And more than once it’s happenedUpon walking through a doorI forget ...

Re:(V) Feel a cool summer breeze giving goosebumps on my skinSick of driving, I'm lying on the grassblades reality ends as this fantasy beginsprelivin...

Because we don't follow directions too well?It's a fantasy world I'm livingRewinding on times we sharedAlone reliving our romanceHopelessly reality im...

Maybe because nothing is realAnd I can't accept we're throughThat it's easier for me to fantasizeIn dreams that can't come true

Hi Vic,I don't log on as much as I used to. So I apologize for posting my condolences so late.I'm sorry to hear about your loss.And I hope the fond me...

Wow . . .and then Wow again.

I'd like to hear more of the story about what went bad.But another verse similar to the first would be,I flewWith the wings of my heartI knew it was w...