Way to go Rocket, very good critique. Hi LifeIsThought,This certainly has a cathartic feel to it, very personal, good stuff. It took me three reads to...
Powerful lyrics here. But it kind of moves fast so I don't know what certain parts refer to. Like Now, a tortured soulIs on a missionTo save my neph...
Life,[Verse 1] Glances at faces Making my memories bleed Surrounded by these places Bled them all dry (I understand what you're saying, but I think t...
Seems pretty good to me...Just wondering why you chose the word arm in verse 1... seems like an unusual body part.Also I have a problem with the use o...
This is my first post, and it's the first song I've written in the past three years or so, so... please give feedback? Thanks.Poison ArrowI woke up to...
Thank you for your kind words.
One of the things I find toughest about writing is that when I write it is always about something sad or disturbing. I have tried to write "happy" mu...
I know of some instructors who teach the elevated thumb position so you're ready to fret with your thumb if it comes up in a song, but others I know t...
Thanks for all of the advice. I do own a strap that I bought with my old Ibanez, but when I took a lesson with an instructor a few years ago he took t...