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LingDar
LingDar
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Joined: Dec 16, 2015
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7 years ago
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Re: Y14 w17 Only One Eye?

Thanks. I was thinking it may need to be broken up. A bridge is probably in order as I think I will do more with this song.I'm working on making song ...

7 years ago
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Re: Y14W17 - One Eye on the Future

Pretty. I like the lyrics. The only criticism is that the music sounds very familiar. I don't feel like I am listening to something new. I like be the...

7 years ago
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Re: Year 14 Week 14 Downtime Blues MP3 Added

Overall I liked it. I think the two interludes for instrumentation need to be different from the rest give it a time to really break up the song as ot...

7 years ago
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Re: Y14W13 If...Please

Thanks for reviewing. I see the last line doesn't work do great in this version. I worked better in the first version, but I messed up and had too man...

7 years ago
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Re: Y14W13 - If I Had a Year

I like, it is very beautiful and moving. My first thought is someone with a terminal illness. The only part I don't like is the last two lines "no mat...

7 years ago
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Re: Year 14 Week12 Sometimes You Gotta Shout

I loved listening to it, except that recording buzz. The only issue that I came up with is that the verse about the girl feels like an abrupt thing as...

7 years ago
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Re: Please help with my song Lyrics

I like the overall thyme and flow. There are a few snags. Mostly you being too passive voice and not active enough. For exampleYou have "but I can't '...

7 years ago
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Re: Y14W9 - Saving Wren

Thanks for the feedback. I haven't really intended to work that much more on this as it is practice but I may pick it up later. Also I sing in the bar...

7 years ago
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Re: SSG14 - Week10 - Imagine You

As the others have said the specific words are better. What sort of music does this go to?I like the "All things living the whole world round" but I d...

7 years ago
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