Interesting song. I'm not sure if I really agree wholeheartedly with the message of the chorus but it seems light-hearted so I'll take it with a pinch...

The story comes across very well and the central emotion - nostalgia for a place - is something most people can relate to easily.Lyrically, the only t...

Looks very good as it is, although I did prefer the suggestion of "sitting on the front porch" as opposed to "standing at the front door", as it gives...

I like the song and its rhythm and I think 2 valid points have been brought up regarding the divergent themes and also the length.My idea would be to ...

Great job, I think you nailed the assignment the best anyone has, and I loved the mp3!No alterations necessary.

Hi Vic,I really like the first two lines of the song - they sound great and I wish I'd written them.Overall the song seems a bit wordy to me - the lin...

My first thought was, this reads like a nightmare! But you managed to sing it a lot better than it reads... all the B's are not quite so noticeable in...

I like the fact that it's short, bleak, intense, very focused on its subject, with very little filler.In terms of sound I actually preferred the versi...

Vic, your SSG topics have run like clockwork for the past 2 years, a little corner of the internet I could always rely on. In fact as a fellow Brit I ...

Hope these are appropriate to what I understood of the assignment and that someone finds inspiration:Latin Flame10,000 Words For BlueBadass Belgian Bi...

The first verse made me think of the Chilean miners...

Looks like a decent song but I can't help wishing you'd given us a teensy bit more of a hint about what his crimes actually were. It's the missing pie...