Yes, I remember those days well! :lol: Your description of them is right on too. Your backup singers in the chorus are really cute and fit in with th...

I really liked this, the content is great. I've often wanted to write a similar song but the words were a jumbled mess in my head, lol, and you seem t...

Wow, this is very vivid! Great wriitng!There is lots of good stuff in this, but for some reason,Singing echos through the narrow streetThe drifting mu...

Nice attempt! Not too much there to comment on, but the 'I know it's true' line really stuck out for me as well. That would be an easy change though. ...

Sometimes a subtle change is all it takes. :) I liked that better, thought it worked well.

What a catchy tune, I like the melody very much and enjoyed listening! It is however much more up tempo that I had imagined it was going to be when I ...

I have to give this a listen tomorrow, so far I've just read the words, but what wonderful words. Great idea for a song and a person can take a lot of...

Thanks to all of you for taking a look, your nice comments and some good suggestions.Vic - Yes, Nighthawk is a guitar. That might have a lot of people...

Thanks for stopping and take a look Peter. Appreciate it. :) When I first started in on this I thought it would be the lyrics that I would have no pr...

I'd say you came through your 'writer's block' quite succesfully with this. :D Good stuff!You've had some excellent suggestions already. To me much o...

Thank you for your comments!You honed right in on one of the problem areas I had - the second verse. I wrote that, especially the second line over and...

Not for callouses, but for nails I have something called Witchcraft. The guy that told me about it did say something that it has an ingredient that is...

Hi there,Are you still in there? If you can't play, it's a good time to write songs! Here's something to play around with. Not sure if you read music ...

Sometimes I notice that great things happen with my playing after a short break. Not sure why that happens but hopefully you'll find this to be true a...